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Resignation by ~musical-nymph:iconmusical-nymph:





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   I knew from the onset
      that he wasn’t my type.
  
His fingernails were well kempt and
   the contents of his wallet

   were trite. He said to me
   “Let’s get out of this place.”
   and I agreed,   eager
   
   to ignite.

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©2006-2009 ~musical-nymph
:iconmusical-nymph:

Author's Comments

Resolution: write something every day.

[Since when do I rhyme?]

This is just a scrip-scrap; the line breaks need help.

(Recording: [link])

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:iconimaginaryending:
simple, and slightly vague, but i understood it VERY clearly!!! i love how you can do so much with so few words!!! :clap:

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"My hand thinks I'm an artist, but my heart knows i'm a poet." -Bright Eyes
:iconmusical-nymph:
Thank you.

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You were right about the stars: each one is a setting sun.
:iconjabberwock-child:
Like the first comment, simple though I wouldn't say vague. It doesn't go into particular detail sure but at the same time it has quite a direct expression of an honest desire. It's very pretty in a mix of a daydream sentiment kinda way but without losing itself to that and ending up 'washy' and maintaining a definite pluck at the emotions if you will :)

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Tristan is not a monkey he just smells like one
:iconmisaniovent:
I like it, but I don't like the sound of the word "trite" for some reason.

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Hide the past!
:iconmusical-nymph:
Thanks. :heart:

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You were right about the stars: each one is a setting sun.
:iconmusical-nymph:
You didn't get first comment :P

Funny, because I love 'trite.' I like ts.

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You were right about the stars: each one is a setting sun.
:iconfrankienexus:
so good to have u back
this is sad and wry and rather beautiful
burn away with short bright sparks

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I love your comments and your textures
:iconmisaniovent:
:(

I couldn't have gotten it! It was impossible!

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Hide the past!
:iconmusical-nymph:
I haven't been away; just uninspired.

Thank you. :heart:

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You were right about the stars: each one is a setting sun.

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